It was me, like the Jasmine
With some Pebbles as friends
They picked up my dust
And received my fragrance
For it’s said in sayings
A touch of jasmine’s dust
Even the rough as pebble
Stand to acquire a fragrance
I was no poet, no never
Couldn’t read poetry
For, I didn’t understand any
Then how, to write a love story
Then I got friends, most beautiful
Poets, who make a heart to skip beats
Poetry flowing like molten lava
Engulfing all loving hearts
I would jump in hot lava
Searching for the jasmine’s pollen
Stretching a thirsty tongue
Swirling to gather any dust and honey
Here a poetry is born
With stone stretching out
And exploring the flower
For some dust and honey
Stone assumes the fragrance
Of the beautiful jasmine
And the child born out here
Is hopefully a loving poem.
So beautiful! I know poetry is something not that you not always do but this is brilliant.
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Thank you so much MVS. This is priceless coming from you the very epitome of the best in this field.
Gives me tremendous satisfaction, ecstasy and fulfilment. Thank you 🙏 😊
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Such a lovely write up !
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Thank you so much jyo
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മുല്ല പൂമ്പൊടി ഏറ്റുകിടക്കും കല്ലിനുമുണ്ടാം ഒരു സൗരഭ്യം !
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അതു തന്നെ ഇന്ദിര. ഇന്ദിരയുടെ ലെൻസും മറ്റു കൂട്ടുകാരുടെ കവിതയും ഞാനകുന്ന കല്ലിനു സുഗന്തം തന്നു
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Its butiful KJ
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Thank you കേട്ടൊ😊
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നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്, ഇനിയും എഴുതു
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എഴുതാം. എന്നെ പടിപ്പിചു തന്നാൽ മതി
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Who me…am Learning tooo 🙂
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That’s called ‘truly humble’
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but that’s the truth 🙂
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Beautiful 👏😄
You should continue writing poems.
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Thank you Ekta for making my day.
Sure I will 😊
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Beautiful
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This is the first time I’m reading your poetry and you have penned it beautifully. It is as engaging as the fragrance of jasmine… 🙂
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Ahh thank you so much. I am new here but words like this will make me want to write more. Please see my today’s post ‘power of poetry’
Thank you again Maniparna ❤️
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Welcome… 🙂
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😊
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Beautifully written Kurian. Would gladly like to read more of your poems.
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You are very kind Dominique
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Beautiful work…a hard stone picking up the delicate fragrance…. Wonderful 😍
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Thank you Poornima. This an old saying in Malayalam, meaning any bad person who is with a very good one will start behaving. Even a hard stone lying with fragrant jasmine will get the fragrance 😊😍
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Yeah..true
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👍
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Very nice Kurian… Keep it up… Very well written!
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Thank you so much Reema. That means a lot to me
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That was a wonderful maiden attempt, I think u shld continue, ss it is coming straight from your heart. And as far as poetry is concerned, that’s all it matters. Well done KJ
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Thank you again Anamika
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Welcome again KJ
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