It’s your command that I obeyed
for I am under a spell
it’s there even now
cast on me with the wand
which is love than magic
happiness in the air
for it’s the most important
O Aphrodite, you are the one
embedded in my heart
goddess of beauty love and sexuality
always in my mind
But it can’t be, no one to be hurt
so the ritual, beautiful and power
every day, every night
right on our hearts
It’s from your rock, lovingly given
universe and the secret
part of the ritual
invoking law of attraction
Universe unifies the two
transporting just the love
don’t say anything, just receive
for the love is cast in Stone……
KJ……
Very nice Kurian…
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Thank you Shalini. Your comments are the most precious for me.
Yes, I can’t believe, I wrote something which I call poetry… wow 😳
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That’s good… New things… Every day is the time for discovery
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Thank you Shalini.
A big encouragement for me
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Time for new discoveries Kurian. Well composed 👍
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Thank you so much Radhika for the sweet and kind comments
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Congratulations… Now there is no exit from this poetry world….;)
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Thank you
And oh wah, I just got caught in your spell with the wand and happily accept the punishment. Will try and write again
Thank you so much
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Thumbs up
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Thank you very much. Priceless comment for me 👍🌹
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This is a beautiful piece
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Oh wow… thank you so much for the compliment.
My first ever poem. And encouraged by you all. Thank you for the company and teaching me to read poetry with my heart ❤️
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Keep writing 💞
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I will Priya 😊
Anything for a stone connection ❤️💓
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Discovering new within us is a great happiness and I feel WordPress gives best platform for it. Congratulations sir keep going….
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Thank you so much Subbashini. Priceless comments for me 🌹
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My pleasure sir 😃
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👍🌹
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Amazing! I loved it KJ! 🙂
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🙏🙏🙏 made my day Megha
Most important feedback 🌹
Million dollar one 👍
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Hehe…:)
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It’s awesome 🙂
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So sweet of you to encourage me. I am obliged. Thank you so much 🌹
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Very well written and composed, it’s a lovely piece Kurian!
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This is the message I have been waiting for!!
Thank you Niharika.
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You are awfully kind! 🙂
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Thank you 🌹
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Very heartfelt poem, Kurian. Love the line ‘Universe unifies the two’. What happens, happens. Sometimes with things like love will just happen and it will leave it’s mark like a stone. Beautifully written.
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Thank you Mabel for the comment and encouragement
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You are welcome, Kurian. Keep writing.
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Thank you Mabel
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Who said this one is your first poem? It seems that you are easy and familiar with the genre…Go on KJ.
Expecting subjects other than the stone😇😇
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Oh thank you Achu. Made my day.
Ok I got the certificate from the maestro. I will write
But on stone, the observation from a stone target 🤔
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Very well done, Kurian!!
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Like I said, poetry comes from the heart ❤️ and read with the heart ❤️
Thank you for the encouragement
My first ever poetry, dedicated to Aphrodite and the stone given by her 💎❤️
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That’s amazing and again the proof that what comes from the heart always works out and shows a beautiful result. Keep it up!!
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Thank you Erika. Take care
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I will, thank you 😊
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Nice
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Thank you so much.
I feel connected with the stone now 🌹
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